loved the game. there are a few kinks to even out in the english writing that your proofreader has missed. if the game hasn't been abandoned, i can correct the few grammatical mistakes and improper choices of words that are left for free. just reply to my comment if you're interested. other than that and the fact that it's incomplete, it's perfect. i hope it's continued. thanks for the demo.
Just finish demo, great game! I look forward to play when it release. Also I think the explanation of puzzle 3 confused me a lot that make me see the the answer to finish it. Some suggestion: Instead of text explain, you can use video ingame example to show the player how it work. Anyway, Good luck with your project! Sorry for my bad english.
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loved the game.
there are a few kinks to even out in the english writing that your proofreader has missed. if the game hasn't been abandoned, i can correct the few grammatical mistakes and improper choices of words that are left for free. just reply to my comment if you're interested.
other than that and the fact that it's incomplete, it's perfect. i hope it's continued. thanks for the demo.
Still waiting :'<
Is this game still being developed?
Great game! The last puzzle really took some time for me, but it was worth it!
Thank you so much for playing our game demo! Glad to know you enjoyed it!
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Just finish demo, great game! I look forward to play when it release. Also I think the explanation of puzzle 3 confused me a lot that make me see the the answer to finish it. Some suggestion: Instead of text explain, you can use video ingame example to show the player how it work. Anyway, Good luck with your project! Sorry for my bad english.
Thank you so much MHD! And don't worry, your English is good. Even we are not native English speakers, yet we can understand your words perfectly!
And your suggestion is a great one. We didn't have much time to improve the guide back then. We will keep this in mind and try to make it better.
Thanks again, MHD! Your feedback is one big motivation for us!